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The original track is gold !! The lyric was so strong and motivating. Especially the line - " Let go of the story you tell yourself and Show" , I connected deeply to this song because of this line. It is really rare to find such soulful vocals to work with. When I heard the track for the first time , I was able to make out the verse - chorus - verse - chorus arrangement already present. I like the choice of elements in the original track , very minimal but a strong vocal compliment. I added few elements like guitar , strings and beats. My main idea was to keep the original track vibe and add an electronic hook line , the resultant was this song. I am not a trap style music producer but i thought if i could incorporate that style , it would compliment the lyrics and bring out the feel of the song . By the way , while i was making this track it was raining here, so i recorded a few rain samples to add to this track :) Enjoy !

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danskio 1 year ago

Brilliant. Love the trap vibe!

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Shnuvi 1 year ago

Thankyou Dan :) i never knew you would comment on my track :) means a lot :)

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Tobi 1 year ago

Like the slow burn intro. Agree with Brian... intro could speed up a touch. ...blending under another track could work well - little exposed on it's own.

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Brian for President 1 year ago

Nice, Vishnu! I love the ambiance of the SFX intro, but think you need to hook people sooner. Maybe make that shorter up front and convert it to an atmospheric outro? @1:21 I think the vocal should sit higher in the mix. @1:51, this is truly YOUR song! Tease that sooner so people look forward to it. Love the bass/kick play @2:39 A cool track man!!

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Brian for President 1 year ago

You're very welcome, Vishnu! Have a good rest of the week!

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Shnuvi 1 year ago

Thanks a lot Brian :) very helpful feedback.

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