I still like the idea though, it's pretty cool, the introduction of those dubstep growls was a nice ideea.
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I really like your intro chords, they really have that emotion to them and that often is the hardest part to do. I also like the vocal loop you used. I think you could potentially used more pads in the intro and post drop and expand them into the stereo image so that its sounds louder. I think that your drop is a bit weak in my opinion.