I think the track overall has a great vibe. I would take out some of the instruments as it pulls the track out of clarity. Lead vocalist has a nice tone! The parts like at 0:30 could use harmony on them to give that part of the song more depth. The only other thing I would look to change is that some of the lyrics have the same word twice.
I like a lot your track bro! And I like the Farisha's voice as well... Very original composition with a touch of Dream Pop that gives to it an ethereal and melancholy air. Well constructed composition and a well defined sound. Great!