Great vibe overall man, love those breaks and its very clean and easy to listen to. Hope that helps and keep it up! This is sounding sweet with just 2 years experience so you should be proud too! All the best - RYZY
Spot on mate!! I thought you might of forgot lol. Really good to hear some honest feedback, I agree with you mate will definitely take this I to account for the next time. Sometimes its difficult to find these things, when listening over and over. Really glad you've given me feedback, I will look out for you in future!
Playing around with some different rhythmic ideas on the piano would take away the robotic sort of feel and help with the transition to the drop. Love how the drop comes in and how you introduce the elements that follow on. Maybe another subtle layer below your top bass during the drop for a little extra edge and to tighten it up and finish it off.
Overall great work, not too much going on and really clear idea. I'd have kicked it in at 8 seconds and let it work up to a build rather than taking it in hard. Noticed the vocal comes in at 31secs between 2nd and 3rd beat, something to watch as would have sat nicer just after that 1st hit. Although in time can sound out due to chord progression.